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Paradise Chapter 2

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Chapter 2 – Welcome to paradise
Luke and others in the train continued to stare in awe of the world around them. It truly was as if it was spawned from the mind of toddlers. Many were still staring at the castle with the same wide eyed amazement children get when they see the castle at Disneyland for the first time. The train entered from a hole in the side of the wall surrounding the palace, turned a sharp left and we were given our first look at what was inside.

What we entered was a large courtyard. There was a main pathway leading up the palace itself and in the centre of the path was a large area with two fountains and benches. The palaces that weren’t paths were gardens, filled with bushes and colourful flowers. From what Luke was seeing, a few things truly stood out, amongst everything else he had seen since coming here. For one, the colours in this world seemed to be much brighter than the ones in the previous world, like he had entered a children’s tv show. Secondly the fountains were not spraying water,  they were spraying some sort of white liquid which would require further investigation and finally.... there was a unicorn. Luke had to rub his eyes several times to make sure he wasn’t dreaming but there was a unicorn.
“It really is like we entered Walt Disney’s dream land” said one of the other boys, who from our previous conversation had said his name was Richard.

“Or somebody just really likes fairytales and decided to put them all into one world” said Jessica
Just then, the train stopped and the doors opened. Gabriella came over to us from further up the train

“Alright everyone” she said in a happy voice “It’s time to get off”
We all got up out of our seats and tried to walk however due to lack of sleep, we all started yawning and rubbing our eyes. Gabriella just smiled.

“I know you all very tired from the trip, but just stay up a little longer to meet our queen and then you can rest”

Sounded reasonable enough, somebody had to run this place and since we were going to be living here from now it would be a good idea to meet them. Then a thought struck him

“This queen” he said “It wouldn’t happen to be ABParadise, would it?”

“You remembered!” said  Gabriella “Yes that’s her alright. ABParadise is just her username though, she will tell you her real name when you meet her, so come on let’s get off this train.”
We picked up our bags and all made our way out of the train and into the courtyard. Gabriella told us that we were going to be called one at a time for our meetings, just for all of us to meet the queen of this world could get to know us individually, so the first one was called and the rest of us were told we had free time. The first thing Luke did was go over to one of the fountains, as he noted earlier it was spraying white liquid instead of water but he had a theory of what that liquid was. Making a cup of his hands he collected some of the liquid, lifted it to his mouth and took a drink. He immediately recognised the taste

“It’s milk” he said aloud

“Are you thirsty?” said a voice went from the left of him

Luke turned to see another fairy, this time with more traditional fairy wings with a mix of yellow and green as its colours. She had green eyes, brunette hair and was wearing a green dress that looked constructed out of leaves.

“Um... not really, I just wanted to check if this was actually what I thought it was”

The fairy smiled at Luke, gesturing for him to sit down on the bench she was sitting on. Luke joined her.

“So you are one of those for came on the train?” she said

“Yes I am, I’m Luke”

“I’m Azalea, it’s a pleasure” she said

Luke was about to continue the conversation, but he yawned again

“Sleepy?” Azalea asked

Luke nodded “Most of us would be in bed at this point in the old world” he said “we stayed up late so we could on the train to come here. So yea I am really tired”

Azalea just kept smiling, she brought her arm around Luke and pull him close, despite being made out of leaves her dress was very soft.

“Don’t worry, Luke” she said in a calm and soothing voice “Very soon, you will have the meeting with our queen and then we’ll find you a nice crib to rest your head in. This is the last step and then you can focus on your new life with us.”

Luke looked up at Azalea and saw the sincerity in her eyes and smile. It was clear that these fairies wanted them to be in their world. Luke smiled back at her, glad that he made the choice to get on the train. Just then another fairy with dove wings came over to them.

“Are you Luke?” she said, Luke rose and nodded “Hello there Luke, Her majesty is ready to meet you now”

Luke waved goodbye to Azalea and follow the dove winged fairy into the palace. The interior of the palace was just as impressive and colourful as the outside, with a long red carpet stretching across the floor and large gold statues placed at intervals in the walls, large banners of all colours ran down the walls and many chandeliers lined the roof. They came to a set of large doors and Luke saw two fairies in full golden armour, carrying long spears that looked magical. Luke guessed this was part of the palace guard, when they noticed us they opened the doors to reveal the throne room.

The throne room was huge, my whole street in the previous world could have probably fit in it. Marble pillars lined the way with more beautiful banners held up along the walls. A skylight shone down upon the room and at the far end, sitting in a large throne, was the queen. Wearing a shimmering blue dress, with blonde hair, the most piercing blue eyes and a pair of golden wings on her back, the queen overall appearance was just awe-inspiring. Atop her head sat a golden crown with various jewels and around her neck sat a beautiful gold necklace. Luke was just in awe and somehow managed to keep moving behind the dove fairy.

“Presenting Luke Anderson, Your Majesty” she said, Luke immediately got down on one knee, head down in bowing to the queen. This prompted a round of “awws” and cooing from the fairies gathered in the room which Luke found confusing.

“Raise up, little one” the queen said and Luke got up to look at her again. She got up out of her throne and came over to him, the dove fairy moving aside.

“Luke... I don’t suppose you would be DiaperLuke, correct” the queen said

“Then you must be ABParadise, you majesty” Luke Replied, still in tremendous awe of the queen
“That’s correct” the queen said “My real name is Cassandra, I took on the moniker of ABParadise in order to speak with you. I am very happy to see that you and all the others accepted my invitation”
“So am I” Luke said “So what happens now, your majesty?”

“Well, first I am going to explain to you the rules you need to obey as a citizen of this world, give you a map of this world so you are never lost and then let you go off and begin your new life here. I know you are very tired darling...”

At the moment she said, Luke let out a loud yawn which many of the fairies chuckled at, including Queen Cassandra

“...very tired indeed” she said, which caused Luke to blush “So I shall explain things quickly and then let you find a nice crib to sleep in”

“Rule 1, you will always been in diapers. You wrote about all the time so now you will be in them. You will not use the toilet and you will let one of the fairies change you. Rule 2, the fairies of this world are your carers and therefore will take care of you, including feed, bathing, changing and other activities, you will not do those things yourself. Rule 3, you may explore this world, have fun and play with your friends at your leisure BUT bedtimes and nap times are set in stone and will be enforced, unless there is  special occasion allowed for by me. Rule 4, you will be bottle fed and eat the food we give you in a highchair. Now any breaking of these rules will result in punishments, determined by us. These can range from spanking to being left in a dirty diaper for a while, but I hope we don’t have to use those. Do you understand the rules?”

Luke nodded, they all seemed like obvious rules for any ABDL so he had no problems with it
“Good” Queen Cassandra said, “Now allow me to give you a present” she conjured some magic in her hand and placed her hand on Luke’s wrist. When she removed her hand, a white bracelet was left in its place. “That bracelet will show us where you are in the world at all times, allowing us to get to you quickly if something’s wrong.  It also will show you where you are on your map so are never lost. Now it’s time for you to get changed and start you new life, Amisa, can you help Luke out?”
Luke turned to where the queen was looking and saw a woman with purple and orange fairy wings come towards us.

“I will do so, your majesty. Would you like to come with me, Luke?”

Luke nodded and Amisa took his hand led him down a passage of the right of the throne room. She led Luke into another room where more fairies were waiting, one of them taking one of the people from the train into another room. There were changing tables, wardrobes and a doors leading to other rooms, probably places to sleep.

“Well” Amisa said, turning to Luke “Shall we get started Luke?”

Luke turned away, embarrassed by what was about to happen. Amisa just smiled and direct his eyes to hers

“I know it’s embarrassing, some others in here had the same reaction, but we are here to take care of you now, there is no shame here”

“It’s not that...” Luke said, starting to tremble at what he was about to admit “It’s that, I have bruises on my body, from attacks from my so called “father””

This turned all the heads the room, some were shocked at Luke’s revelation and Amisa was first to speak
“Luke, we can help with those. We have potions here that can heal your wounds.” She kept complete eye contact with Luke “remember what I just said, we are here to care for you. I know we can’t get rid of pain he caused you, but we will do what we can to help you. Now please, show us”

Taking a deep breath, Luke pulled up his shirt to reveal his body. There were black and purple bruises all over his chest and arms, there was also cuts are different stages of healing. This left the fairies stunned, some with tears developing in their eyes at what they saw. Amisa was first to get over the shock and quickly hugged Luke.

“Oh Luke” she sobbed “I am so sorry.”

“It’s alright” said Luke “You weren’t the one who caused them, and now the man who did it can never reach me”

“Yes, you’re absolutely right” said another of the fairies, wearing a more traditional maid outfit and having beautiful phoenix wings “He can’t hurt you again” she came over to Luke “No one here will hurt you that way. The only thing you have about is being spanked if you behave badly, but never anything that bad.”

“Thank you” said Luke, tears forming in his own eyes “Thank you, for making me feel loved.”

This was the first time that Luke had felt genuinely loved since his mother died. After her death the family self destructed, now with his father being a drunk and his siblings having their own problems dealing with their father and their new lives away, it was hard to cope with alone.
“Well then” Amisa said, “Shall we get you changed?”

Luke nodded, ready to put the past behind him and begin his new life. He began by taking off the reminder of his clothes and handing them to one of the fairies. Then Amisa directed him to one of the changing tables and told him to lie down on it. After Luke was laying down, Amisa grabbed one of the potions on the side and poured some of the liquid onto her hands, after rubbing it in she began to rub the liquid into Luke’s skin. It made Luke’s skin tingle and after a bit of time Luke could see the bruises and cuts disappearing, he couldn’t believe his eyes.

As Amisa’s hands passed by Luke’s stomach, a giggle escaped from him. Amisa paused and looked up

“I’m sorry” said Luke “I’m ticklish in that spot”

Luke immediately regretted telling them that because Amisa then started tickling him, causing wails of laughter to erupt from Luke. After about 5 seconds Amisa stops and allowed Luke to calm down

“I have a feeling the other carers in this world are going to enjoy that Luke” said Amisa “Thank you for sharing”

After she had finished with clearing up the bruises, she reached underneath the changing table and grabbed a disposable diaper and baby powder. She liberally applies the baby powder and then tells Luke to raise his back. He does so and she slides the diaper underneath him, she quickly does it up making sure the straps are secure.

One of the other fairies pulls some pyjamas for him to sleep in. They were baby blue with penguins on it, which reminded Luke to get his penguin toy out of his bag.

After he was dressed, the fairies started cooing at him, which was embarrassing but then Luke remembered that he was the one who wished to have a world of ABDL fantasy so he had no right to complain.

“Now then” Amisa said “Shall we get you into to bed?”

Luke nodded and then was surprised by the fact that Amisa picked him up and his bag with seemingly no difficulty. She then carried him into a different room.

“This will act as your bedroom for tonight” she said “Afterwards you can explore our world at your leisure and sleep where you happen to be. There is always a crib available here so you won’t be sleeping on the ground”

Luke looked around and saw that the room was a light blue with white furnishings. A changing table, a wardrobe and a crib were set up ready for him. The crib had a mobile above it. Amisa lowered the cribs side with her magic and placed Luke inside it, raising the side back up again afterwards. She placed his bag next to the crib, dug out Luke’s penguin and gave it to him, which he hugged tightly. Amisa gently pushed Luke down onto the soft sheets, pulled the blanket over him and placed a pacifier she had conjured up in his mouth.

“Remember Luke” she said “This is your world now and we are here to take of you. Some things like the pacifier, the diapers, the crib, all of those are mandatory however other baby toys are completely up to you. Now get some sleep and dream happy dreams about your future here. Sweet dreams little one”

She started the mobile up which started spinning and playing  a lullaby and left the room. As Luke watched the mobile he started getting more and more sleepy, as all the day’s events and his comfortable position made him drowsy.

Tomorrow I begin my new life he thought I wonder what I’ll see

Hugging his penguin tightly, he closed his eyes and started to sleep
Here it is chapter 2. Next chapter we will start exploring paradise so do you guys have any ideas for it? leave a comment below if you have ideas
Thanks 
Kenitoh
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How you are able to write something at other ABDL's, specifically me, have no hope to dream for, is beyond me. I am fighting off my depression and one had to drink my own blood to fight off thoughts of suicide. After coming out of the depths of my deep, dark, oppressive depression, it never ceases to amaze me how hopeful, almost naively so, people can be. When I first read this, I found the hope I had searched so long for. My friend, you have taught me to hope again, something I once thought impossible. This story is something to be proud of, something to cherish. Keep writing like this, and you will go far. Thank you so much for writing this story, and if you can, continue it beyond what you have for it now.